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Friday, June 14, 2019

Red poem

First I write words. I put them in to sentences, and here they are. I hope you like them.

Red Poem

Red is tomanto sause on my fish & chips.
Red is a super yummy red apple.
Red is a flying helium balloon.
Red tastes like a gost peppers.
Red smells like a beautiful.
Red sounds like a fire truck.
Red feels like a heater.
Red looks like our flag in the playground.
Red makes me angry.

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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2019 at 12:06 PM

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2019 at 10:03 AM

    Hi Corbi.I like fish & chips with tomato sauce. When I read your blog you forgot to put something about what smells beautiful.I like the smell of flowers.Why did you pick the word red? from Tyrone

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2020 at 2:49 PM

    hi corbi it me lina i like your work keep it up it ii cool

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  4. AnonymousOctober 30, 2020 at 2:39 PM

    hi corbi i like your red poem it is cool you have did a lot of work
    keep on doing it

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